Smokeless fire burns the papers,
Of resolutions by blunted pens,
Using the ink of united powers,
Every verb written in past tense.
The one of only three places to be,
Is now standing on a corroded stool,
Trembling pillars on their very knees,
Slowly entering history books in school.
Flightless pigeons in barbed cages,
With broken wings and grey feathers,
Rusted steel surrounding for ages,
An untold tale of the silent wailers.
Lying on the bed staring at the ceiling,
Lying on the floor staring at the stars,
Wish to share this comforting feeling,
Wish to share the tales and the scars.
Gaza's Freedoom
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Friday, February 05, 2010
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shakespeare, haha..
InsayAllah, satu hari nnti masuk dlm silibus ENG4U.
@Future Murabbi: Shakespeare? lol...Thanks.
ooo, ni laa layout baru. Nice! n simple :) Aiman, agak2 kalo nk berbusiness nnti, bukukan sume poem2 ko da buat
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@hudasaffry: Thank you. Insha Allah I planned to gather all my poems into a book. My mother already suggested that to me.
Smile!
man, kitorg buat lagu pakai poem ko ni smart gak.kalau jadi lirik serius mantap.haha.deep giler
@Asyraf: Sure. On the bottom, write "Lyrics by ibnuazlan". lol
p/s: As long as you're not the one who sings it.
nice poem..fantastic=)u have the talent..polish it up=)
@nurul: Thank you. I appreciate your support. If you have any suggestions on how to improve my poems, please let me know.
Smile!
erm nothing to improve
it seems to be perfect.
great job..
goodluck for your next entries
smile back!!=)
@nurul: Thank you.
nice! i'm touched
"The one of only three places to be,"
Those three places are Madjidil Aqsa, Masjidil Nabawi and Masjidil Haram eh?
and what's the significance of this line here? I mean what does it mean.
"Wish to share this comforting feeling,"
What is the comforting feeling really? Hope you can kindly answer :)
@kayah: Yes, those are the three places. Good job!
The "comforting feeling" refers to us. We live in comfort while they live in chaos. So, I wish that we can share this blessing with them.
Thank you.